Comments : The Embers are dying

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Good write. Unusal way of posing it, though. Your talent is in evidence. Quite sad, actually.

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    The moon is gone and the stars
    dead. They wept in their suffering. But
    died, nevertheless.

    ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. Another great write,.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    When i first read this poem a few days ago it stayed in my head for a long while poems like these are inspiratons to people like me well done
    Take care
    HS