Not bad.. i liked the fact that it didnt rhyme, it made it more sincere and serene.. short, but u got ur point across.. however, u stated everyone's point of view and neglected yours, which is needed, coz this poem is about what u think.. i mean, WHY do u think its a disease??
good effort, tho
keep going
take care
thnx bunches for ur comment
NannO

Another short poem, but I like short poems lol. It was very unique. I don't think i've ever read a poem about silence. I'm usually more into rhyming poems, but I really liked this one. You did a good job.

Cayce x

It didnt rhyme, but not all your poems do, I thought this one didnt need to rhyme because the message was strong and i knew what you were writing about, it was very well done, keep it up my friend
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