by Mavick Jul 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Iv read many of books but none as complex as u...every night i think about what am i goen to do...see you are not at the bottom but your way out high...where angels sing and birds fly by...and i say to myself where should i start...then i hear something beaten ,its my heart...so i put my hand up and they grow with the power of love...rekindled with happyness,they take fight like a dove...now i hold dare in my arms...now i can finlly see...L.O.V |
by kim
I think your poem is good it just needs a little help with structure. But i do like it nice job |