Comments : I Will Be There

  • 17 years ago

    by dorky goth girl

    Wow that was really good i loved it!!!!!!!!! keep it up hun!

    much love kels

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick Hanshaw

    *speachless*.....wow.....very good hun....very

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    Wow........that was a very beautiful poem! i loved it!!!! i'll give you 10 stars!! lol keep up the good work!
    love ya bunches
    Fruitcup

  • 17 years ago

    by Conor

    WOW!! wat a play on words i loved it! keep up the good work!
    XXXCONORXXX

  • 17 years ago

    by Elmo

    That is really good. dont stope righting them..
    alexis

  • 17 years ago

    by jenna grace

    Rille good. i like it. it was soooo cute!! i woulda rated higher, if it were possible. lol!!! good job

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*cutie carrie*~

    Really good and sensitive! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Very Sweet
    lovely Rhyme
    lovely message
    this poem was amazing
    as always
    youve become a Wonderful poet
    Great job
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    I'm speechless.
    This is just...
    Simply beautiful & amazing & perfect.

    Great job, hun.
    5/5

    Love
    Lolli

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryan

    This poem speaks to me its like how i feel towards that special someone you have a gift

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Another Chemical Romance

    I dont usually read love poems but for some reason this one caught my eye its brillant you have so much tallent they way you format your poems are amazing good work

  • 17 years ago

    by cindie

    This is my favorite part I will be there when you
    want to cry, when you
    want to die. I will be
    there when no one
    else cares, and when
    you need a friendly
    stare. I will be there,
    my teddybear. I will
    be there, to care, and
    to make the rare so
    full of those angelic
    stares that take your
    breath away.

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow sounds like you got a keeper i like the way you put your poems together keep up the good work
    aunabeth