I like this it was really good.. and I love music :-)

Very nice piece. great meaning that not many can write so well about. it's organization was o.k. but all in all it was a great piece.

~~Retniapdoolb

I've never read a poem like this be4 i rly like it 5/5

WOW!! I really liked this one, it was so unique!!! I have never read a poem about this!! Usually i dont like poems that don't rhyme but this was an exception!!!! Wonderful!!! One of my favorite poems!! 5/5!!! Keep it up!!

This is good. Really very different... Very impressive work!

Interesting concept. I will be honest with you, I didn't really enjoy reading the poem all that much. non-rhyming poetry has never truly hit me as the best, and I like more structured formats. This said, the originality of the poem, and the interesting theory behind the words is awesome. Well written.

Peace. [Sole]

Very nice, I like poems that don't rhyme because they tend to come straight from the deepest part of you, every word can have a huge impact. I don't agree when you say the word "music" has no meaning because it does. The meaning however differs fro person to person, for me its like my life, when I go to sleep at night, the silence is deafening! Well great work, keep writing and best of luck!

I play six different instruments myself so this really spoke to me. A great job... I didn't much like the rhyming, but it was unique.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ahh! I see the passion you have put into this poem! And it's a terrific gift to have, passion is. I loved how you used music as sort of a metaphor (I think).

The flow was very good in some places, and quite weak in others. But great job, all the same. =) 5/5

Samantha

Wow.. Im speechless.. I dont think I could ever be this close to being good as you for this poem!

Wow girlie!! You did an awesome job on this poem!! It is very beautiful and easy to read!! great job!

Beautiful descriptions here, its strange that by being evasive but using great language u have really caputerd 'the beauty of music'! great job!

-biscuit-