Hey!
I love your poem very much!
Its great!
xxx

"hearts of hate"

I've found a new screen name. I love it - it's dark, contradicting, clever.

And as for the rest of the poem. Well, I generally like it. It flows well, and it written without flaws.

Another favourite line is this one:
"The memories are suffocating"

I'm a big fan of methaphorical descriptions - and that fits lovely.

If anything, I would suggest maybe giving more emotive language. I can see the love/hate relationship, but I can't truely feel it.

I don't particularly have anything negative to say about it though, because I like it. Nice work Bridgette. x

Wow! I can relate to this alot, it reminds me sooooooooooo much of one of my ex boyfriend's..grrrr....but anyways you really showed great emotions..it was wonderful! 5/5

You certainly have a talent for writing sad poetry, there is always one stanza that i love in your poems, i liked this one :

"We see each other through cold eyes
And feel with hearts of hate
You're trying so hard to kill me
But you're a little bit too late"

The rhyme was flawless and the poem fit together perfectly, great work

--Steph

Wow---This poem is really deep-I love it. The flow is perfect and the rhyme adds a lot to it,,,My favorite stanzas are the last two-They are really heartfelt---5/5 Great write

Very nicely done. I'm this situation myself. Keep writing

Greate poem!

Gr8 poem... love always ends sad. very good rythme. i like it:)

This poem was rele sad but it was rele good

Pretty good poem. Not the best but I liked it.

I really like this poem,It's very well written, please check out my poems, thanks!

I loved this poem, i can relate real well to the emotions written in here, and you do a fantastic job of displaying how you feel through your words.
Congratulations.

Hey, this poem is great, i loved it. it was deep. keep up the work. maybe check mine out thanks.

I can relate to this poem man this is really good

I no how u feel. i hate guys who are true to girls.

I no how u feel. i hate guys who are true to girls.

I no how u feel. i hate guys who are true to girls.

Wow that is amazing good job~brittness aka mountain dew

Great poem...loved the ending.

I love this poem
it reminds me of my ex kevin. and all the other cheaters ive dated.. good work