Great poem i liked it 5/5

I seen quite a few errors. In my point of view I didn't really like the flow it just sounded choppy.. "I see i would be sad," Needs capitalized "I" 3/5

-Rachel

That was good. i don't care what rach says i loved it.
~sarah~

That was pretty good

That is so awesome i totally know how you feel

Aww, very well written :)
5/5
Thank you for the comment.
Keep up the good work love!
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This is how ppl feel when they are in love.. it was very sweet.

Now thats a truely heart felt poem!! great job!

Awe liked that... was a really sweet poem straight from the heart!! well done

Love
Jacs
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Hey, i really like ur poem...its sweet i wish my bf would actually do sumtin like this

lol

Another great poem with a great message out, i really like your poems, another 5/5 from me.

Okay; Look I will be ver honest because you have a lot of time and things that you should improve.

I read four of your poems and in everyone of them I feel that the flow is not quite there through out. Your first and second stanzas melt together well but then on I feel the poems loses it's integrity.

I also see a lot of words that you have put in the poems because you couold not find others I think. Try to not put any word(not even a a, an, are .... anything) if it does not express excatly want you want to say. You have a concept in your poems, thought mostly love, it is well but somewhere you are failing to visualize your concept.

My humble apologies if I have sonced harsh, if you are interested private message me and we will talk some more.

I think the flow was kinda jumpy, but there was a lot of meaning behind the words. 4/5

AWWWW that is so adorable! lol great job! 5/5