Wow! I can relate to this so much! I hate liars. I really do. I don't hate many people but I hate liars. Anyways, to the poem! Lol. The poem was very good! It flowed very well. I like how you worded it, and kept the poem short. You did a wonderful job!

Cayce x

Wow that's insanely powerful. Great use of words and emotion.

Wow very powerful... full of emotion... i can definitely relate... great poem 5/5

First of all i want to thank you for your comment on my poem=] it means alot.
i loved this poem! i can relate to it so much. i once trusted a lier and they ended up sending me into a long stage of depression. anywayz keep up the good work! you have a great thing going for you! Much love!- Kitty

My biggest critique would be the use of the same words over and over - like "you" in the first stanza. Maybe switch it up a bit. Someone told me that once about a poem of mine and I rewrote it and I think the reworked version is much better than the original

^^Thank you for your advice. I changed the wording a bit so maybe it sounds a little better---I'm not sure...

Have you any idea how much I relate to this? I feel like this every day, with a new person... Great job descripting this.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

WOW, again another powerful poem. I can totally relate to this, you did an excellent job. Another 5/5