This was a very interesting write, its deeper than the words on the screen. It speaks of someone leaving you alone...it's a lovely write. 5/5, in my opinion.

Another perfected perfection
Indeed, i did enjoy it.
No criticism from me my fellow poet.
keep it up and push on.
~Emah

Hmm, this was a bit better. The flow was not very good. I felt like I had to pause at every line in this one. But the topic, and the contents were great. 5/5

It was a pretty good poem. It was a little short though. I though maybe you could have gone into more detail too. The flow was okay. The rhyming felt a little forced though. I felt that you put a lot of emotion in it, so that was good. Overall this was not my favorite poem of yours but it was still okay. Keep writing!! =]

Cayce x

I think this was a great poem it was very deep as all of your poems are lol but this was extra special nice job!!