Heyyy! im lovin the poem!!
keep writing ur really good
=]

Wow this is really good! I love how you describe "love" lol

This poems is really good. I like the way you write

An amazing poem. I really like this.
Thanks for the comment.
Keep writing.
5/5
Jadee. :)

Love the poem and how you compared the passion of love wonderful work 5/5

I Kno wtchu talkin bout! i like it!

Hey,
Thankz much for the comment.
I like your description of love,
something that is far beyond
what words can explain...
But i think you're getting pretty
close.
x
x
Keep it up.

Aww so sweet i loved it .xx

I really liked it :) I thought you could have had a stronger ending tho :) keep it up, thx for takin time to read my poem

Nice poem... nice emotion and neatly penned. Try to put alittle more rhythm into it... it sounds a little (mellow) or flat pictched when you read it. but 4.99999999999999999/5!!!

And one last bit, the rhyming is a little distractive... you bend and BREAK the sentences just to make it rhyme. Sometimes, a poem may not need to rhyme but could be nice if a ryhtm is put into it. Hey, thanz 4 reading my poem.

Hey great poem, i would say it sums love up pretty good like x x

I think this is your best one ...

"The passion of love is a secret none of us can keep"

This is the best line ... good job!

"The passion of love can be as hard as a Gem Stone
As cold as an Ice-Cream cone
But as nice as the sunset....."

Hehe, thats my nickname, Gemstone. I liked this because it was so damn cute! lol
5/5
*gem*

Good ryhmeing word i cant spell very well haha lol anyways good work * comment back hehe * lol 5/5

You ask for honesty, so here goes, i found the rhyming to be rather forced at places and do not like the alternative spelling. But i thought the sentiment of your poem was super sweet. I hope the critique is taken in a possitive light. Grant