Comments : Goodbye Kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    That was good!.. I liked the rhymes and the flow was on. Awesome stuff. The only thing about this poem, is I read stuff like that too often, so some of these ideas seemed unoriginal, but that's ok, still great poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done my friend, this poem was great. the rhymes worked well, the flow was spot on and i loved it.
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  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I can somewhat relate to this one. The flow and rhyming were both very good. I liked your word choice in this one. Great job!

    Cayce x

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    The question on the last line gives so much impact and emotion to the poem. A great technique, well written. Nice poem, flow was great.

    Peace. [Sole]