Ever sweet, i love it

OMG! You are such a good writer! That was beautiful. So do You Have A Girlfreind? If you don't you should because u sound like such a sweet guy.

AWWW THIS IS SOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!

Wow!!!! this is a beautiful peom. Keep up the good work. 5/
xoxoxo
jess

The title was beautiful. So simple yet filled with so much meaning. I loved your opening stanza because it just lured me into this beautiful scene and I was eager to read more because you described the emotions flawlessly. The flow of this was so fluid and everything seemed to come so naturally for you which was enjoyable to read. I loved how you ended it because it completed the scene nicely. Well done *5/5*

Aww tats soo cute

I need a tissue Lol. Great poem. I loved it.
reminds a little of how I am

Awesome. i love this poem. great writing and choice of words to rhyme.

Beautiful! i love this poem its amazing.. ur a great poem.. keep up the good work!