Excellent.
It was very touching, and emotional.
The flow of the poem was great, through most of the poem.
There was one spot where it was a little of.
But it's a excellent poem, just the same.

Aw, that is so sad. I'm sorry about your friend, so many people are faced with that kind of problem in these days. But the poem was really good. Had a nice flow and rhythm and rhymed really well. Great job on this. I hope you find a way to help your friend! Keep it up! 5/5

Beautifully written! love it!

Again, work on the puncuation. Funny how something so little gat make a huge difference. I liked this poem though really well done.

Juls

That was awesome, it was strong and powerful with alot of emotion and is very touching, keep it up my friend, you have talent
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I read this and thought.
Wow!
This was perfect from line to line
stanza to stanza.

Blew me away.
completely.
love it.
5/5
well deserved and earnt
~Emah