Comments : Last Night I Had A Dream (the sequal)

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    You have to finish it. Its very suspenseful at the end

  • 17 years ago

    by Imperfect

    I dont no but
    The slowly he knelt beside me
    i think u mean then.... just thought id let u no

  • 17 years ago

    by Zaima

    Touched my heart..thnx for sharing .. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    It is soo worth continuing! i loveed it.. being in love is a lovely feeling.. and knowing that someone out there couldnt live without you is fabulouse!!

    Your poem had a flow.. your rhyming is great.. i just completly loved your poem all together, and i hope that you'd continue it..
    take care..
    luv,,
    haya 3gab =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Henry

    Not surprising another great poem