You have to finish it. Its very suspenseful at the end

I dont no but
The slowly he knelt beside me
i think u mean then.... just thought id let u no

Touched my heart..thnx for sharing .. :)

It is soo worth continuing! i loveed it.. being in love is a lovely feeling.. and knowing that someone out there couldnt live without you is fabulouse!!

Your poem had a flow.. your rhyming is great.. i just completly loved your poem all together, and i hope that you'd continue it..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

Not surprising another great poem