Hehe so graphic love that. Very good my lovely friend.
-Love, Jen.

That was.descriptive, the poem was interesting. It was one of the most descriptive short poems I have ever read, most of the shorter poems aren't well done. The ending was sort of weak, I think you could have used stronger words, but I like the sudden twist to it. Good write.

Wow. This one was really good I must say. The depth, as in the others, are wonderful. Nicely done!

-Jennifer.

Sad but its great i love it.Remember I love you and im here you are wonderful and great dont ever 4get that.
Love ya Strugglingxoxo