enjoyed it, thank you for sharing
~Da polarbear has spoken~

wow i really like this poem espec the last line
Separated were prisoners but together we are free
well done keep writing xxx*5*

1 word is all that can express it,
AWESOME!

grear poem!! very very nice! ^^ keep up the good work!

i love this poem. it is perfect, and has some really deep lines in it. its totally awsome

I LOVE this poem. Keep up the good work :)

That was great, but you should put it in stanzas and check spelling. but i liked it overall!

Hey this is a very good poem i love how u write good job

I liked the verse that said that life is too short but without love it is too long.
v. beautiful.
..xx

Awww its a really good poem good job

Stunning Poem! I love it!

Great poem 5/5

I respect any other guy who can truly write his feelings down expecially in a poem

keep writing
it was amazing

james

I enjoyed reading this poem 5/5

Dude, Clap Clap. Verry nice.....

Amazing...just amazing.
It's a very touching poem.
5/5
&& welcome to my favorites. :)

I loved your poem. It's so good to see guys expressing their feelings.

BpH

STOP!!

you're goin to make me cry

You are really good i know this comment isnt the best one or the one u might read cuz u have 40 more lol so all i will say is i loved it it made me realize somethings... anyways keep up to great work..
Jamie

"Seperated we're prisoners but together we are free" I like this poem it has a lot of heart in it. It's like wow...............wow............=)