You Said You Loved Me...

by Stephanie   Jul 12, 2006


You said you loved me,
You said you wouldn't leave me.
You'd hold me tightly,
And told me I was your one and only.
But months passed by,
and we grew farther apart,
Not knowing sooner or later you were going to break my heart.
So now I'm replaced by some other girl, I kept thinking what did I do wrong???
But eventually I grew smarter and strong. Till this day I ask myself, was I good enough??
Or did you fail to see what I was really about??
So I hope you and your girl have a good time, cause I'll always know that every time you close you eyes,
the first thing to pop in mind, were our great times...

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  • 17 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Great poem! One thing i would change maybe would be perhaps spacing out the last part of your poem. You started out by making different paragraphs for each lines, and then at the end you bunch up alot of sentences...i still love it though. its a lovely poem! :) xoxox. any of my latest?