Wow. How sad!! The 4th stanza was my favorite!! 'I would give my life just for you to survive' Great job! 5/5

Nelle --
this was soo cute! i loved it. the flow was perfect, and the rhyming was good. great job, 5/5

love ya,
samantha hollywood

Aw this is so sad, great poem though. I hope you get the guy you want! That's what happened to to me, i waited long enough and now we've been going out for more than 6 months:)

anyways great poem

--Steph

There's lots of emotion in this poem and he deffinatly isn't worth all your tears if he's just going to break your heart like that. Exelent poem. Keep writing. =]

Pip xxx

Aww hun im sorry to hear that your love was in vain lets hope it changes and he sees what i see in you and come back to you. I love You and im always here for you dont forget. _krisanta_

I really did love this poem, it was very sweet and sad at the same time, it was lovely, keep writing
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Great poem. The rhyming pattern was unclear, but it did not phase the poem, more added character to it. How do you do that?!? Some of the lines really stood out to me as relating to my own reality, excellent write.

Peace. [Sole]

Veeerrryyy nice. i really really loved it. so beautiful, and soo emotional. it touched my heart. brilliant.