As i lay
by brian Jul 14, 2006
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As i lay down to sleep i pray your hart i have to keep and if some strikes whal im down baby girl to you i pass my crown |
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19 years ago
I really like that u should make a book of all ur great poems
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19 years ago
Umm really short....u shud add more to it..then it cud be great...its pretty good..but cud use more detail..nice job...4/5
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19 years ago
Nice short poem
much luv,
jubilee dominguez
