You know i love you cassie you know that

I love this poem!! U know wut! I love all ur poems!! They are so strong and that means a lot to me! Great JOb! 5/5 hehe

Good job on this poem I loved it. I liked your rhyming and the emotion conveyed through the power of your words. 5/5

The last few stanzas are what made me really want to comment..the first few are a little too basic almost...like ive heard different variations of them before...i think we have a similar writing style/structure with the 2nd and last line always rhyming...but ive been changing mine a little for poems i write that i think need to be switched up a bit..overall good job and keep going...
love ya lots,
sore

WOAH ..!!

That was excellent ..!! keep it up ..!! ... oh and ... i know how it feels .. suicidal thoughts are very strong, and so hard to get over ..

I'm always having those types of thoughts too but serious I never told anyone but dont treat those feelings as ur weakness do that opposite and make them your stregnth.

Amazing. A very good write. Powerful words- and an even stronger effect...
Paints quite picture. 5/5

Hannah-

Another great one! Love this one as well...Great job!