Omg, i loved this! I could relate to this very very very much!! it had a lot of emotions, and in a way i understand completely where you are coming from! it was kind of sad..but great!

_-_Chanelle_-_

Raw.
There is some work to be done indeed.
but if these arent your best i guess it can be excused.
=P
~Emah

I liked this one! Some work of course needs to be done......but in general a very good write!

I can relate so much to thi sone! I understand it deeper than most people could!

Very powerful/emotional. Great job.

I've been in this exact same situation you describe here...thankfully after months and years of prayer about their situation they stayed together and worked things out...Keep your head up and pray about your parents...whether you know it or not it helps...So many teens can relate to this feeling....good job!

Pretty good, I wish it had more imagery.

This is a really sad but great poem...I love it! You have a real talent!
Keep it up and thanks for the comment on my poem!
XxxXLysetteXxxX