I loved this piece, hun! Wow, just so great! I especially liked this stanza:

I held you, held a
moment I never wanted
to let go. We laid under
the stars, and kissed;
oh how I miss you. Than
like a thief in the night,
you went out of sight.

I love you, and take care!
Lolli

5/5

Thats a very cute poem and i know how you feel

Really really good poem ;)

Wow..this poem was just...
Amazing
I cant even say anything else
your love for johnny
must be Strong like crazy
Great job
5/5
~MF~

Wow that is really good, i feel kind of like that except my bf lives about 6 miles away and his mom wont let me see him, (sad)

It reminds me of jell-o lol it was pretty (( pretty is my new word nd along with pringles )) keep it up PRINGLES WILL RULE!

Great poem one of a kind and one i will not forget

Aww thats soo cute i really like it

Hehe good poem

Wow now thats love 5/5 i really love your poems
aunabeth

Hrm.. Interesting. I like the jello idea :). 4/5.

-PassingAngel