"In the wrong that I did and the right that I ignored.
You gave me the keys to open this door."

I loved those lines. This was a great poem, it made me smile:) It's obvious you have a very strong relationship with God, which is great.

--Steph

That was pretty good, i wont lie and say it was amazing or awesome, because i am not a lying person, and it didnt seem to flow as well as it could have, but i liked the meaning behind it, and there were some very strong parts within the poem.
the one thing i would change, would be the lines:

You washed my sins and replaced my tears.
With a heart that is righteous and a sense for no tears.

i wouldnt have put the word "tears" on both lines, it doesnt work very well

love Tara-Kay xxx

Awwwwwwww
great poem, so deep.

Chris,
I think this poem is amazing. I am proud of you if this is true. I am starting to let Him in myself. 5/5

Wow, being a christian and reading that...it makes me want to grow even closer to god than i am now. Great job!

Excwellent excellent excellent poem!!!! If i could give it a 100 i would!

I rly like this poem. its awesome. the flow was nice and it..idk it was just very good i like this ur a good poet....keep up the good work 5/5

This poem is really good. o.0 keep it up
always&forever
-jennifer-

Amazing poem! i loved it, it was touching and inspiring! i loved it.. 5/5 most definatly

heidii

Chris, I really liked this. It was short and vbery precise. Wonderfully written. 5/5 Loretta

Wow..
That was rele amazin...
Great Job =]]