Comments : I am a broken promise

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Um well some choice words I admit but not too great. Something was lacking near the middle. The beginning really captured attention then it began to kinda mess up in the middle which doesn't flow as smoothly. Then the end...repeating broken kinda makes it sound slightly weird. So it's a good first and shows promises of talent.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by rebecah

    I thought it was a good poem. keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~If U cOuLd Be MiNe~{mrs.cruz}

    Aw that was a good poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by x-aLeX bAbe-x

    Well done i liked this small but effective lines welldone xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love this poem. And i think you know why!

  • 17 years ago

    by Erica Chambers

    This has alot of meaning to it. It is very good. Keep it up!~ericamayb~

  • 17 years ago

    by Does He Love Me 4 Me

    Nice!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Wow....this was a beatiful poem...so many promises..life is like that...but great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadlyPoetry

    I like this poem too your good

  • 17 years ago

    by josh-and-valerie-together-forever-and-always

    That was good hottie

    get BACK TO ME AND COMMENT ON MY POEMS