Hey sweety, thanks for your comment on my poem. I've been having alot of love troubles lately, as have you as by the looks of it. I know that poetry is supposed to be for the writer and you are meant to say what you feel. But if you are worried about comments back,and if people will read your poems then I do have one suggestion for you. Things like this line:

"baby i am so in love with you, every poem here except one is for you.
I can make a whole novel just for you and tell the world how wonderful you really are."

personalize it so much to you and only you, that the reader randomly gets disconnected from your poem. If you're not worried about the feedback you get on this site, you just want to share your pain with the world, then you keep at it and I wish you the best of luck and all the strength in the world. I can see through your writing that you have alot of pain, or atleast that you are able to express it. So keep it up. Thanks again.