If you comment on my poem I will coment on yours hope you like

Oh wow........its all i can say. i dunno if i could say i enjoyed reading this cause it isn't a good situation but wow...

Very sad poem, it touched me deeply. I always have a soft side for these types of poems that grips reality by the wrist.

That hits you hard. few grammer mistakes, but the poem was really good. very heavy topic and you write it well.

well done x

Wow. This is really brings awareness to a very grim topic. I like how you put yourself in the perspective of the victim; it makes it more real.