I love you!

by Jordan   Jul 17, 2006


The moment I saw you I was so amazed,
that the slightest peak of you kept me in a daze.
I couldnâ??t resist that big smile of yours,
and the looks that you had made me want you more.

You were taken at the time,
but so was I.
We both wanted to be finished with them,
but we really didnâ??t know how, why or when?

Day after day we began to talk,
and I even walked with you when you worked out in the lot.
The more we hung out,
the more we just couldnâ??t be without.

The day finally came that we were together,
and I said that I wanted it to last forever.
At first I thought it was too good to be true,
and you repliedâ??but baby im here with you!â??

We fell so deeply in love,
you were always on my mind and you were all that I would think of.
I was worried about your past,
Because you were a cheater and your relationships didnâ??t last.

But in your eyes I believed you when you told me that you loved me,
and also that you would never hurt me.
I was surprised of how much you changed,
but one day came when you gave me so much pain.

You left with your ex,
you kissed her and it could of led to sex.
Then you came and confessed that what you did was wrong,
my heart was crushed, I never thought that this day would ever come along.

I knew you were sorry as I saw the tears in your eyes,
the kiss did not mean anything, im glad though that you didnâ??t lie.
I was crushed and very hurt,
I felt that compared to your ex I was nothing but dirt.

But in my heart I knew that I couldnâ??t leave you,
everyone makes mistakes and this time it was you.
I felt so much love for you,
and I knew that with all your heart you loved me too.

I gave you a second chance,
because I knew from now on that I could trust you again.
From that moment on our love for each other became very strong
and I knew that surely you were the one.

We are happier than we ever could be,
I still find it hard to believe.
But we will stay together,
and we hope that its forever.

For me its like a dream come true,
You know that always and forever I will love you,
just like you love me too.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brian King

    Wow you put a great deal of effort into this i am quite impressed and amazed. you tell your story but kept me interested rather than thinking you had written "just another love story" i was actually intrigued and wanted to continue. your lines would benefit from being more balanced in length, however you have such a lengthy, but well put together story to tell i can understand why their are so different