I really liked it. keep up the good work

"Ill take away your misery
I can wipe away your tears
Help you release all those memories
You stored up over the years"

That was my favorite stanza. I liked the way you wrote this. A letter like poem. I like those kinds of poems. I write some like that. Anyway, I give this poem an overall rating of 4/5. Most of your rhymes were good, but yourself and help don't really rhyme. Other than that, the flow was good.

The one thing I didn't really like about this poem (didn't affect rating at all) is that you were basically telling people that you were the only one who understood and would be there for them. I don't know if this was just an indirect poem, that you were just writing "just because" or if you really wanted to convey that you are there.

If it was that you wanted to convey that you were there for the people who cut, then I think that you should've gone about it a bit differently. Maybe like not so much that you are the ONLY one kind of thing.. I dunno...

It was a good poem anyway. It just kinda felt like you were forcing yourself on to the people who cut (sorry just being honest)

~BJ~

Okay, wow. I feel stupid. I change my comment earlier. I didn't realize that the poem was about the razor blade writing to the cutter... I feel really stupid... Sorry about that. Now it makes more sense as to why it's so forced.

~BJ~

OMG this is so good! WOW...well done! I luv u heaps and will alwayz b here for you ok!

Luv ya x x x