Every Line Was Sweet As Pie! It Was So Cute, But I'm Not Just Saying Cute As In An Adorable 12yr Old's Poem, But a Very Creative & Well Structured Poem, Overflowing With Talent....5/5
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
Ps: Whats Your Secret To Writing These Poems? Gosh Their Awesome

Great starting stanza. Wonderful flow throughout the poem.

I love how this is written. It is like a see saw of emotions. The way you kept complimenting all he does but how you still detest it, quite interesting.
Reminds me of the whole thin line between love and hate....
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Is I'm truly in love with you.
[That was a great line. Although it felt like you could add an extra word in there? ..maybe say "Is that I'm truly.."
It's up to you though.]

But overall, It was a great poem. You word your poems so well. Excellent vocab!! There's not much else to say really. I don't see anything else that should or could be changed. It was great. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I loved this poem, it was very well written. I thought it was so sweet and cute!! I like the way you worded this poem!!! You have talent never quit writing!! 5/5!! Well Done!!

This is a truly heartfelt poem i enjoyed reading it...5/5.
~Kyra~

This is a truly heartfelt poem i enjoyed reading it...5/5.
~Kyra~

Totally awesome,its funny I have felt that way about a man. I'm glad I was smart enough to decline
5/5 great job!

Lovely poem I'm going through the EXACT same thing right now!

A poem that i haven't seen for so long..not many people have the passinet and vocabulary u have put into this poem.....its a peom worth reading and diffenitly worth the effort to write such a great work.........wish u all the best......

I know this feeling all too well.

You need to change that first stanza. The way the whole thing is rhymed just makes it seem like it's part of a different poem. Otherwise this is brimming with passion and vitriol, and is evocative of emotions I have experienced which makes it easy to visualize.

What a lovely poem !! good job. Loved it.
5/5