Comments : To coin a phrase

  • 15 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Wow.. best I've ever read from you totally! I got no crits, sorry..

  • 14 years ago

    by ALEX

    Interesting. It sounds nostalgic, which I'm guessing is what you were going for? My favorite lines are "As they flaunt the bruises,
    On drunken nights." The rhythm is immaculate. 5/5