A Fragile Dream

by Avrii Monrielle   Jul 18, 2006


A Fragile Dream

A fragile dream, waiting deep inside my pillow
I anticipate the moment it comes true
Fractions, percents, slope, equations
Giving me a homework-made sickness

Sliding under the covers, I fall asleep
Homework unfinished, praying for a dream
When I wake up in my other world
A story of gasoline and butterfly colonies

Blue butterflies streaming towards the horizon
I walk on the mountains near the street
Hiking higher than the clouds
A beautiful, fragile dream

There I see the cars down low
Smell rusty gasoline
Nothing at all like
The fake magazines

It's beautiful
It's nature living with humanity

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Sorry it's taken me so long to send you a comment chickadee, but i hope to make it worth your while, this poem = fantabloish!

    the line about the homework unfinished, haha its so me, I can totally relate to it. your imagery and connection to your work is evident in the word choice, for such a young writter, you show more passion then most oldder poets.

    And I also want to congraulate you on making 300 poems, thats quite a massive portflio you have going on here girly. Keep up your passion,

    Now on a personal note...HELLO! lol how are you?

    Lol Poetry wise 5/5=]

    Love Always Jenn

  • 17 years ago

    by Shatter

    I like this its awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shatter

    I like this its awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Well done, heartz! very nice,a nd I liked it a bunch... Keep it up, hun! 5/5

    Ravyn

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