Lmao i love this...my best friend (sorefromreality) and i know something along these lines...lol. this is so funny...keep it up!!!

That was soo good!!!!!!

That was good! I was confused until I got to the bottom, then I understood it all. 5/5 I loved it!

~Love Me Always~
~Nicole~

Lmaoo.

I think that your idea was great, I just got lost throughout the poem until the end. I think I know the effect that you was going for just make sure that your poems have a consistent flow. I struggle with it sometimes also.

That funny u good keep up the good work

Whoa! lmao...u hav a good funny streak in u. differetn from wut i normally read from u but really good... good job, thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

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it made me fall asleep

LMAO omg this was good chaught me off graud i thought it was gonna be about a boy i loved it lol. _krisanta_

Lmao.. omg that's great. I loved it! Great job on this.. 5/5 Keep it up!

Cute

That was a great poem ..i loved it ..check some of my poems up

I love the ending! i had no idea u were talking baout beer! lol

That was very good. I liked the way that you made it seem like you was talking about a dude and then switched it up to drinkin a beer.

I had to read this after I saw all the comments, and yes, very good, and Very funny. I love it...

LOL! that was funny.. great ending.. i was really getting ready to hear what bad thing you were getting upto.. nice job!

Lmaoooooooooo

Thank you for confirming that for me, about your song. Pretty frickin haliourious poem by the way.

Hillarous, lol

Hahaha this is amazing