Awwww that is soo sad but the last line i think it should be " our heart" Just an opinion...but other then that it was great! you're very talented babe 5/5

You really can write, man! great poem!

Away from happiness and love
I'm tired of living in fear,
I'm tired of being alone,
Crying my silent scared tears.
[I really really really liked that stanza. It stood out so much to me.]
This whole poem was great though. I also really liked how you started it. Really strong. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Great job, you can do more by adding more imagery.

Hey that was a really good poem... but i agree with the person at the top i think the last line should be "our heart" but if you like it like it is thats ok cuz its good either way.. but keep up the good work i give you 5/5!!
xooxoxx
...:..kayla..:...

Great poem!! The flow is absolely amazing-and the way you described how you are feeling is perfect. My favorite part is the biginning because of its unique format,,,two short lines, then a longer one:

''I shrink back,
And shudder,
At all the words you say,
I think back,
And mutter,
How it shouldn't be this way.''

Love it! =-D Superb write-Keep it up-5/5

Very interesting. I hope it all goes well. The poem itself is kind of hard to follow. I don't get the person harrassing the relationship feel from the poem itself if you didn't have that introduction to it at the beginning. *shrug*

This poem was really good. but who would wanna harass you and your boyfriend?

Under the Moon

Whoever is harrassing you, you should report them to the police if you know who it is....Anyways, it's a very good poem. I rated it as a 4...Good job :)

Cute but still freaky. Cute as in the last stanza. 5/5

-Taylor

Thats a good poem! and as long as your love for each other is strong no1 can keep u apart,,, good poem!

Keep it up!