I like it and it is sad...

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the hush sound

This has so much emotion and it all shows....keep it up...
~ray

You will never loose me...

Nice poem but sad ne, i really like it as i can relate to it, keep up the great job

This came from your heart, nice...

You're the air i breathe... you are the thing i wait for.. minute by minute.. hour by hour.. you are my energy.. i boost of power... I hadn't herd ur voice all day.. and the only thing i could do is say...
chorus: Was I inlove? or were u just another guy.. i'd fall for to hard.. and get all teary eyed.. and loose my heart.. but now i know we can't be apart... for then i would have no one to love...
Do you care for me.. like i care for you... do you think anything between us could be true?... I know we are different.. But babe i wantta know... do you belive in in sun right after the cold snow.. do u belive.. i love you....

its not finished but i wrote that a while back... for you... I know we've had our differences.. but i wrote that song for you..

~`Sarah`~

I rele liked this poem ... and also it is a little related to me as well
keep up the good work