Dude very kewl! I love ur topic choice! This poem is very... true, it just, like smacks people in the back of the head about education. I agree with it being a very importent topic, and u pulled it off very well, good job! Keep up this work, cause its good. 5/5

~+Megan+~

The is the cost of temptation

^^^im confused what is that part supposed to mean?

it was a 5/5 winning poem
very good.
~Emah

A strong peice with a well written and thought through message within it's content. fairly original topic for written but exectute well. a lot of well expressed truth in this peice

5/5

Beautiful rhyming poem here Chris. You are very talented, and it's great to see you have accepted God in your life. Keep strong, stay strong, and keep on writing wonderful, uplifting poetry. God will walk with you along the way in your life. Embrace him. Keep up the great work. Take care and God Bless.