Wow, how exiting.. I have never written this kind of poems, I didn't even know what it was... I guess you learn something every day:)

Very nice! Epitaphs are hard to pull off without any of it sounding forced and what not, but you did a great job with this. Loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I remember this from the contest! this is really good! it has so much detailing in such a short thing! 5/5 congrats on gettin h/m in my contest

I looooove this one. I am a huge fan of these poems. And I like your's and how you based it upon a soldier. Amazing work.

Very creative, I wonder what the last line means, you should show that on the sidenotes.

Youd did a fantatstic job on this poem!! I like the meaning of your poem!!! Great Job!! flow and rhyme were great!!5/5!!

Beautiful! My fiance is a soldier in Iraq right now actually... so i really did love this poem! Great work!

Really loved this poem my boyfriend is in iraq at the moment.. so really liked it. keep up the good work.!