This is one of my favs now, that was one of the best poems i have read. you are so good, you did a great job!! =} and i want to thank you for what you said about mine, and yes every thing is great now!! Thanx!

I like it alot...h and thanks for commentin my poem....

xOx Nicole

I love it. every thing is so true. got a gr8 rhythm. keep writing:)

I love your poems. and thanks for the comment. =) this poem is short, but the words have so much meaning into it. i love the unanswered prayers, its so true.

Amazing writing...i can tell you are very much so connected with your emotions...very good

Its amazing how u can bring out so much emotion in 2 word lines! great poem..keep writing..that was brilliant! 5/5! luv ya!

The detached tone you write with here is very effective and I liked the impersonalness (I just invented a word) because it was as if you were writing either from the view of someone watching the situation or from someone who has experienced it all and sees the entire picture. Really effective, nice write :)
~Ariana

Wow, i definitely agree with Brianna. You really brought a lot of emotion into those short lines. It's really quite deep and i enjoyed reading it.

*Truly Fantastic*

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