Wow....
soo touching 5/5...
loved it....

also thnx for ur sweet comments too:)

Awh, that was cuute.. It shows that you really care for this girl and you are jealous of the man she has chosen.. But you are also happy that she is happy.. The descriptions in this were pretty good and they helped us to understand what had happened.. The flow still wasn't perfect and could use work.. Your grammer could also benefit from some checking over.. Nice job though, 5/5

Im not nearly close enough to be considered a poem expert..but i really enjoyed this one. Its really sad how the man still wanted to be with this girl but was level headed enough to understand he couldn't and that the best thing to do was wish for her happiness..even though he couldn't be. I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks..I really appreciate comments like that. :) And this poem is great. I know how you feel. Thanks again!

Good poem, Unique love topic i must say. keep up the good work

That.. is one of the sweetest things I have ever read. It's swims in pure love for this woman that is not yours at this moment. That was truly beautiful. Keep it up!

That's sad Hun. I liked it though. Very nicely written. :]

Very nice poem. thanks for commenting on mine.

I love this poem !.....I wish I could
express myself the way you do . It
seems as if the words flo easily . I also
love it because I can truly relate to it .
Your one of the most talented poets .
I REALLY LOOK FORWARD TO READING
MORE OF YOUR MAGNIFICENT MASTER-
PIECES . ( I put the words in capital to
let you know I'm serious about what I
say ..LOL) . Welcome to my favorite
list .

Hugs & Kisses
Letty

This is a beautiful poem, which i can see you have put heaps of effort into!! to me you are one great poet! keep up the good work and keep writting!! x x x x Tiana

I really like this poem. Its sweet how you just want her to be happy, even if your not. Its very sad though. Great poem.

This is great though this has never happened to me though it might still one day im still young but i could feel the power behind it good job:D

keenan ps thx for the comment

Lovely write..
This could be one of your best poem.
Good job.

Awsome i felt that way before but now i am the luckiest guy in the world cause i found some1 i love

Aww this was sad but very sweet at the same time.. Makes a change to other poems of the same form not to have a feel of bitter envy towards the lucky guy.. well done again 5/5 xx

Wow.......awsome poem!! its soo sad though..

I think everyone sees a "lucky guy" or "lucky girl" in their lifetime. It was touching. 5/5

Dearest,
Brit

Wow, i really loved this poem...it really got to me...very well written...

Wow- great poem- excellent work!

Aww, that was so great. and sad too. I really liked it. and thank you on the lovely comment you left me. GBU! Pepa