WOW! Such a lot of powerful emotion.

"Don't thinkk lesss of me
It's the last thing I need
Your standing there beside me
Just watching me bleed"

I loved these lines they created such a powerful image of someone helplessly(?) watching you. The finnal stanza packed real punch and the ambiguity of the last line leaves me speechless.
A great write

Excellent poem. There were just a few times when you could have improved the flow.

Looking Into My Eyes,

Could perhaps be better as Look Into My Eyes?

Not Even A Single Tear.

If you took out 'Even' it would flow a lot better here too.

Your Standing There Beside Me,

You're not Your.

Other than that. Very emotional poem, you ended the poem expertly, great work.

Peace. [Sole]

Hmmm.
I like it.
Its very good for your first poem
~Emah
5/5

Powerful.

I thought it was a great poem. Nice job on it. The only thing is, I didn't like the message at the end. Telling people to join.

Would Have Been Nicer Without The Capitals, but as it is, it had a simply rhyming pattern that was easy and enjoyable.
About the theme, that was very dark, and it has been overdone *sigh* it's so terrible that the whole world feels this.
But, still, it is a good poem.

//T.L.//

Just like everyone else has said, this is a pretty powerful poem. Really drags the reader in. But, I do have to agree with Darien, I didn't think the ended fitted with the rest of the poem. Great job though. 5/5

Natalie``

Well writen, full of emotion. keep writing