I no how this feels to have everyone see whats really not even there..
been there!
you did a great job on this poem.. good job!
always alana

Hey darl this was a very touching poeem. very heartfelt good job expressin ur self. lot of emotion. thank u for ur comment on my poem, meant alot xx

A really nice poem
5/5

GOOD POEM! KEEP iT UP!

*GiRL iN LOVE

Wow, very good yet very sad feeling of what losing a love can feel like. 5/5 You're a great writer, keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

I like ya flo and how u rite da rhymez. Remember there is alwayz some1 out there fo u. Keep up da good work and keep ya hed up.

Stay Playa,
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I think it needs bigger words. commas would be nice, too. either at the ends of lines, or just in the lines to indicate a pause in order to either create some sort of rhythm or to put emphasis on something.