This is amazing poem, the flow the tone. its good

Oh my....wow! I really enjoyed this poem.

Because of the language you used, it reminds me of a poem that could've been written in the mid 19th century. I think that is a very rare and very wonderful style of poetry.

I love it, very much. Kepp it up....please!

That is...KEEP it up. Lol.

Thanks for the support! is there anything i could change about this poem that you can see?

I enjoyed this poem very much!

Great poem. Flowing and poignant.

Triumphant is the word I think of after reading this. Such a delightful piece.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Triumphant is the word I think of after reading this. Such a delightful piece.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Hallelujah!

Hallelujah!

I felt this deserved more love.

Hihi