Love it look at mine

Oh wow...I love it.
I thought this was beautiful.

I like it ... its good. i love all your poems though... but i can relate to this one.

Awesome. 5/5

I like this alot. Great job. :]

This poem was written really well! There's no words to describe it........well done! 5/5

Wow! great job. i love this poem its so good. the last stanza was amazing. i like how the rhyming is like people normally rhym it. great job

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I'm sorry to tell you that I was not impressed. The message was there, which I love, but it could have been better.

I'll read one of your latest and hope to see improvement!

:)

Great poem! It's written really well. The last stanza was amazing. 5/5

marcella

''All the pain is gone when it seems, that all we are living for is one big dream.''

That was so beautifully written!
I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme and the imagery was great.
I think you did a great job on this.

I really liked this poem. I felt a lot of different things here. Keep it up!

A very good pome with a lot of emotion it was an enjoyable read glancing over the titles of some of your poems they seem rather long.