by Jasmyn Jul 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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The things you would tell me |
by Hear You Me
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I just read your latest poem and thought i'd check out your other stuff - so far i am as astounded as the first time. your poetry rocks! |
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That was a very well written poem..id put in the commas where they needed to be and make slight rewording but other than that it was great. thx for ur comment and i kno how deception feels..its explained in my poem "charades." |
by Porcelain
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5/5 |
by KN
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This is a great poem. You write so well. Keep up the good work. And thank you for commenting on some of mine. |