Bloody hell!!!!!

That was wonderfull!!!!! cant fault any of it, 5/5 give you more if i could!!!

Keep it up babes!!

Ur poem is beautiful, it flows gracefully, and speaks the truth. it has an underlying rythum and it contains wonderful comparisons. i love it. i think it paints a very good picture.

Well done i really like your poem it has a lot of feeling

You are a VERY VERY trouble person and i feel this poem is reflected soooo well, your personaility is shown completely through one poem you are an amazing write an i hope you survive your pain love you always your friend alex xxxxx

Thats a very good poem...i loved it...nice wording as well :)GREAT JOB!!!

Its really sweet and deep and yeah i like it. better then i could ever do. well done

That was unbelieveable.I agree so much with Nicole.Keep it uppp:D

Beautiful... so deep, so filled with emotion, so profound... i just loved it... keep it up

Damn...that poem's awesome! I love it! keep up he good work

Wow thts deep......its a 5/5 i lik it alot...

Hiya its alex i have gotten a few people to look at your poetry coz i fink its the best hope you dont mind xx alex xxx

Wow,this is really good i loved it!:)

*cindie*

WHOA!!!! very creative I love it. Amazing write. its a perfect poem

-Care-

I loved it, great job keep up the great work:}

Awesome poem keep up the great writing

That is great i loved it.....i understand it

Wow this is great, it holds so much meaning and is a great read. nice :)

Wow that was inspirering!!! i really liked it!! i wish i could write poems as good as that...but i dont o well!!! great job...luv always...Michelle

Wow v. good! Good metaphor it really works well. I like the way you develop your ideas by using the idea of not being able to see underneath the surface of the water.

This is an amazing poem... It flows so brilliantly... great job!