Those, unlike me, don't know what they are missing
Cause when you're dying, everything is worth feeling
[I loved those lines, Noni. They were so touching. gosh.]

This poem was beautiful. There's no other way to describe it. It was touching, heartfelt, the emotions were great, your vocab, flow, rhyming. Everything was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Another lovely piece of work. I liked it very much hun. 5/5

Ravyn

That is cool. It had a balance of sorrow from a difficult situation at beginning with the positive life message at the end. There is time in writing and in life for both sorrow and joy. It is good to have a postive few of embracing to life when you are in difficult situations that might mean you won't live so long. A movie that really displays this similar message is "A Walk To Remember." When your time on earth is limited your best bet is to give life all you've got and make the strongest impact possible while you still can. A saying that I dear friend of mine always said to me:

"Live everyday like it's your last, because one day, you'll be right."

-Tainted Miko

I really like the message of hope you're expressing. It's so true, and I loved the way you wrote it. My favorite stanza was the fourth one, I don't know why, it just made me think about it.

Great job!

XoXo
Gaby