Powerfull...an beautifull...

Very powerfull.......Deep with meaning...enjoyable read....

Written very well i thourougly enjoyed it
and u commented one of my poems thank you and no ive never written a short story but who knows maybe i will sometime in the future....

Very well written....i loved it...-n-thanks for commenting on one of my poems!

keep up the good work!
~*~*~Crying Angel~*~*~
*~JennaLeigh~*

Very good poem. You're pretty good at this :)

That was so beautifully sad...I loved it! It was so well written, had a good flow, and I loved the emotion you put into it. I think you really capture how you feel and that makes it easier for us to relate to it. Very good, you have a lot of talent.
5/5
Breanna

'cross my heart
slit my throat'

My favorite lines.
Great good.

WOW-sooooo kool.....this is one of my faves from your list!

i dont think it needs to be touched one bit-you totally got it on the spot!

october xx

I love it!! full of emotion!! :)