Hey everyone!!! this poem is for my friend because i love him soo much and he is really hurt and lost right now please comment and tell me how to make it better
pain is something i dont want you to feel
your one of the sweetest people i know
it breaks my heart to see you hurt
shes not worth you heartache and sorrow
i would treat you so much better
and never let you down
you'd know that i truely loved you
and you wouldnt ever frown
i wish you would give me a chance
because i know what your going through
he promised me we would last forever
and told me he loved me too
no matter what ill always be here
to lend a helping hand
we could laugh for hours at night
and watch the sun set in the sand
i'd give up the world
for you to be mine
but the decision is up to you
and whatever you decide is fine
