Wow awsome poem i liked it alot...and a awsome tittle 2!! its a 5/5 4 me

That was amazing...It was a very unique topic..very very descriptive..i loved the imagery your flow and rhythm was great! 5/5

The smell of death feels the air
While the king drinks their blood
When he let loose his troops like water
The world was consumed by flood

*My favorite stanza....Wow...this was so vivid and creepy. I love the imagery...it's flawless and you use it well. It's not overused or too forced or anything. I love how clearly you express yourself. This was a very nicely crafted poem. Keep it up hun. Nik*