You really are a very talented writer. All of the poems I have read by you are just so touching and heartfelt, you express yourself beautifully! This poem was amazing. Great job! 5/5

Wow...Im Speechless! This Was Wow..Amazing...! I Loved It 5/5 Your A Great Writer From What I've Seen So Far!
Love,
Steph

Another great poem of yours. I loved reading it. Keep writing as i think you are very talented and choose a wide range of words to make your poems unique. :D

I really like the way you write, you inspire me actually. Do you think you could help me write my words better? you said I should change something, i really would like to become a better writter, lord knows I have enough to write about

Your a great writer i loved you other piece it was great this piece is so much deeper.

i loved this one too great work once again.

keep it up.

gemma in cheshire

5/5

"Lunar goddess bathe me i your glow"
[in]

Wow, pretty good dark poem. I liked how you used the one word, coming closer to the end. Each of them were powerful and deep. Awesome poem!

Wonderful poem. Amazing use of of words and details.

-YOu can still improve the flow

Goddess --
Wow, another great poem! Just out of curiousity, do you ever rhyme your poetry? I think you should give it a try, as most people aren`t fans of unrhyming poetry. But the flow is perfect, and the amount of description, detail, and imagery is excellent. I really was able to not only grasp the intent immediately, but I could imagine the whole thing as if it were a movie. This was great, keep it up! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Amazing. I like the rythym and flow of your poems, it's purely fantastic. Great job.

The emotions were deep, the flow was wonderful, and the structure was great, really great poem

five 5

ann

Very different. Very nice. It didn't flow perfectly, but I think that's something I liked about the poem. Good job. Much more like your writitng I love to see.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I agree with Samantha it was like
watching a movie. You really have a way of creating images in a persons
mind.It was great.
Deana

Mm, i really like the last stanza. and the beginning. ...actually, the whole thing was good. heh, nice job!

Most excellent write! It held my attention extreemly well, and flows very nicely. Very good job with imagery.

Paggz

I think this is great good job

I love the feeling of this poem. very thought out. Very deep. Excellent poem!! 5/5

Aw a really heartfelt poem it seems you put a lot of thought and emotion into it... take care,
- Polly

In my opinion it was slightly too long. it rocked the flow, but was still very good

Another flawless piece. great choice of vocab and the rhyming scheme seems effortless. great job.
Driver

Lunar goddess bathe me i your glow

[[Think you meant "in" instead of "i"]]

I really liked the details in this piece, and all the imagry. It was fantasticly done. I don't think there's anything at all I'd change, besides the minor error up there^^ ..But great job!! 5/5

Natalie``