Beautifully done. Your heartfelt emotions shine through. I love this poem.

I can feel your emotional sadness through your words yet love flows from these same words entwined together making me teary .

I pray for the safe return of your partener Erisa !
Heart touching poem dear, so very touching .

Wow, such a beautiful write Eirisa. So much emotion put into this. You really do care for this poem. Don't worry, they'll be ok. I'll cross my fingers for you.

Titta I am anxciously waiting Khals return just as bad as you...everytime I watch TV I mostly watch whats goin on over there because I know hes there..I've been praying for him and mom has as well...PLEASE tell me when he returns I'm just as nervous as you...But like normal Rissy, you gotta turn to your faith and believe God will bring him home safely.
I'm so glad to see another poem but when you post it always makes me sad :-(....ummm maybe you should write about flowers or something haha only joking..that'd bore me actually so don't..but write about something happy...the good memories! I don't know what advice to give because really who am I to speak when I don't have my man way far from me..although...I have the closest thing like a lover far away..a sister..you, so I do know the feeling of wishing he was home ( I wish you were here every CHristmas, NY, Easter, Halloween, Thanksgiving, birthday) but how I get through it is shedding a little tear and getting on my knees holding your picture and praying for you...it helps me a lot....I love you Risa, be strong for the boys and don't lose your faith!
Chels
Your bubba sis for LYFE!

Beautiful poem.. I pray there is peace soon

Don't worry he would be ok.
and he will come back soon
nice poem

This is sad and beautiful!

"I am alone
On my own
I am lonesome
I am merely half of me"
^^^ I don't know what it is, but something about these lines really spoke to me. Beautiful poem!

This was good